There’s a whole lot going on in the first chapter. the things I noticed (my personal opinion so don’t get mad):
…………where do I even begin ?………
-the art style is usually the first thing i look at and it’s not that bad but the proportion and the poses seem quite stiff to me.
-for most of the manhwas, mangas and manhuas ik, 2-3 chapters are released at the same time for the opening and if the first one is a summary or smth like that they name it chapter 0.
-the story plot js appears as a cliché and ik it’s not easy to come up with an original story that would work but I feel like everyone is tired of the ” My father-who-hates-me-and-prefers-my-step-sister wanted to sell me off so i killed my self and came back into the past” typa shi.
-the story telling js isn’t the best idk wtf to tell u.
-translation……….. you failed me.
-just telling everyone who’s about to hate on me that ( I’m js a girl ) this is what I (me ,moi ,yo ,watashi, ich, aku, ) think and ik I’m very picky and that maybe the story isn’t that bad (just that the first chapter is a fail). 🙂
I want a cookie
There’s a whole lot going on in the first chapter. the things I noticed (my personal opinion so don’t get mad):
…………where do I even begin ?………
-the art style is usually the first thing i look at and it’s not that bad but the proportion and the poses seem quite stiff to me.
-for most of the manhwas, mangas and manhuas ik, 2-3 chapters are released at the same time for the opening and if the first one is a summary or smth like that they name it chapter 0.
-the story plot js appears as a cliché and ik it’s not easy to come up with an original story that would work but I feel like everyone is tired of the ” My father-who-hates-me-and-prefers-my-step-sister wanted to sell me off so i killed my self and came back into the past” typa shi.
-the story telling js isn’t the best idk wtf to tell u.
-translation……….. you failed me.
-just telling everyone who’s about to hate on me that ( I’m js a girl ) this is what I (me ,moi ,yo ,watashi, ich, aku, ) think and ik I’m very picky and that maybe the story isn’t that bad (just that the first chapter is a fail). 🙂