In Between

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1. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

   @Lightning-Kun EXACTLY!!

   October 15, 2024 at 9:57 pm

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2. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

   THE ART IS GOOD BUT THE ML IS TRASH A FVCKBOY AND THE FML IS STVPID pathetic

   October 15, 2024 at 9:56 pm

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3. Lightning-Kun

   FL is like…. she can’t control herself around ML even after years her love for him remains, he have given 10000 clues that he ain’t into her, most people are into him because of his appearance, MC can’t stop her emotions is impulsive anything related to ML shakes her, she never tries to move on or grow up spine all she, blushes super easily ML knows she likes him but is an ass to her, she needs character development which is hard to see it’s 25 chaps already, I find her annoying, there always gotta be 2nd ML who can help the FL sucks for him cuz he’ll end up with a broken heart just for her heart to get what it wants.
   In short this story sucks

   August 17, 2024 at 9:34 am

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4. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

   I read chapter 4-6 he said she is his sister and a bit complicated. They kissing and he thought of her as his sister? What? While his trying to come back to fl life,knowing she like him. he flirted with other girls? Kissing like it’s natural?
   Kinda disgusting personality.
   And fl is like she’s not on guard on her feelings, like a pushover.
   She knew this guy can stir up any emotions she buried , and is not really in serious relationship even when they young he has a girl friend but she was like”oh he’s not serious about her” like really? Crdt🖊️karaa00000

   August 15, 2024 at 1:20 pm

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5. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

   I’m with an obsessed or possessive red flag male lead, but a manwhore who allowed some girls to kiss him even in front of the female lead, eww.

   Give him a chance? It’s a way of whitewashing the male lead. Once a player, always a player. The female lead is easy to get flustered, like really, she isn’t even discouraged by him kissing another girl. Bro, in reality, that’s disgusting and a big slvt flag.

   If we reverse the situation, the female lead is the sl*t dirty etc.. But if it was the male lead, wow, he is attractive because he has a lot of experience and he has the guts to kiss someone deeply in front of you. Seriously even in fiction Women have fewer privileges😒😒

   August 15, 2024 at 12:44 pm

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6. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

   The fl can be cool. But because of her insecurities, not anymore. A nonchalant but easy-to-fall kind of character. I’m not a fan. Bye.👋 Also the ml 🗑️

   August 15, 2024 at 11:31 am

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7. RuchieMR

   I really want to see his point of view

   July 26, 2024 at 8:15 pm

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8. Ineedhelp

   ml is so annoying, why cant fl just punch him. Actually the whole story is annoying

   July 25, 2024 at 9:51 pm

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9. Y0_M0MMA

   this evil ahh mf. imma need the second male lead NOW.

   April 6, 2024 at 6:39 pm

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