Neyra’s Dragon

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1. PizzaParty

   Ok, this one is a bit…. hmm it’s hard to explain. art 9/10 tl is about 8/10, and storyline 8/10 There may or may not be mild spoilers in here, so be careful, oh ye tenderhearted. This one is a whirlwind (or could be viewed that way because I downed it in one go) The ml is… immortal, and not human. So, spoilers, that’s the ml. He didn’t really understand what she meant to him, or what her humanity meant in general, so yes, some bullying was done without him realizing it. Yes he loved her, no he wasn’t omniscient and perfect. Honestly the first part, before her regression, is realistic. I won’t say anymore otherwise that would really spoil it for you, and I would hate to be crucified for that.
   That said, she isn’t entirely blameless either. She was too immature to begin with, 100 years of semi bullying cured that, but not before she (spoiler, self admittedly) let her family die. I’ll give her that she tried to stop him, but she had (as aforementioned spoiler, self admittedly) already let enough show to convince him that she wanted them dead. Dumb choices, yes, but I stayed despite that and don’t regret it.
   Look, after she regressed, he goes insane bc she postponed destiny or whatever, and yes, he did a few dumb (but lets admit it, he was derranged) and slightly murderous acts, but after he stays with her a little bit, his mind heals. I’m not going to waste my time typing anymore, if you like you do, likewise if you don’t, but I enjoyed it, and I hope you will too. Yes, it’s completed, so read it for that fact at the very least.

   February 12, 2024 at 10:50 pm

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2. Bringthehotdaddys

   this story is not recommended if you have high blood pressure, please read in a safe environment and try not to throw your phone across the room .

   January 15, 2024 at 1:08 am

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3. baby im not even here.....im hallucination

   *author, not other. I proofread my stuff all the time, so I don’t know why my brain read ‘other’ as ‘author’.

   August 26, 2023 at 6:42 am

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4. baby im not even here.....im hallucination

   I read all the chapters and I can’t say I like it. The story isn’t bad, but it has many flaws.
   First of all, the pacing is too rushed. I admit that I did skip some dialogue out of boredom, so correct me if I’m wrong, but all it took was a single play to cure ML’s insanity. He was completely unhinged and almost tried killing FL, yet you’re telling me all of that changed after watching a play? there was no development in his actual redemption arc.
   It just seems forced to me.
   And, in my personal opinion, I feel like the other tries too hard to give this story a plot aside from her god boyfriend. Like all the politics surrounding her mother and royal lineage seem so pointless. I thought this story would be more about gods/dragons, not royal strife.
   In general, the story is not bad. I’m sure others will enjoy it, but I just can’t seem to like it after 48 chapters.
   (To all those who might say I’m “hating”, I’m not trying to hate on the author. Giving my personal opinion/criticism of something, whether you agree with it or not, does not mean I hate the author. It takes time & hard work writing a story, and I know that as an aspiring author myself, so I give them many props and wish them the best of luck.)

   August 26, 2023 at 6:41 am

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5. Cattroll0

   Read until chapter 35. Which do you think the Fl will choose abusive dragon who neglected for for a century, or acceptable incest prince?
   If you don’t like this plot leave it be.
   Art is meh, story I think is bad

   July 9, 2023 at 8:44 am

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6. Amelia Marie

   Unlike the othe comments I don’t particularly like this couldn’t get last chapter 5 makes zero sense
   Maybe if I continue I will come to like it but I gen don’t want to put myself through that

   March 31, 2023 at 11:50 pm

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7. Nova

   Really good read so far!

   February 10, 2023 at 7:53 am

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8. Shravani

   Morreeeeee

   January 7, 2023 at 8:05 pm

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9. nemi-ssi

   I AM IN DIRE NEED FOR UPDATES!! This is effin good.

   January 7, 2023 at 4:56 pm

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10. triamat

    THIS IS GOOOOOOOOOODDDD

    January 7, 2023 at 1:31 pm

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