Mightiest Melee Magician

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1. Sarah

   @Envy dude you are amazing for writing your comment so long 💀💀 anyway, thank for the information.

   April 15, 2024 at 8:52 am

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2. Envy

   I read chapter until chap 5
   There are currently 23 released chapters.
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   I honestly wanted to give this a chance and read to chapter 10 or more to give a review. But I barely mad eit to chapter 5 and do not want to continue reading anymore.
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   This is honestly so bad, one of the worst manwhas I have ever read and I cannot continue.
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   The mc has a bland personality and so does the antagonist in the first 5 chapters. And yes, most Antogonists are written as scummy people and that is usually alright, if the mc is written well. But this is not the case here.
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   The mc does a 180 in his personality in the literal first two chapters. And yes, .ost mawhas actually do this for some reason but here, it’s just way too unnatural. Apparently, he has suffered from bullying for almost 6 years because he can’t really use magic, wich would probably make his personality very introverted, wich it is not. The fact that he just changed personalitys as if someone turned in a light switch is.. well, not good. But besides that fact, there’s more.
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   He gets those daily quests, wich many other manwhas also use but here, it feels too boring and unrewarding for the reader.
   I don’t exactly how to explain it but I will try my best. Basically, yes, we can see that he is training and all that but how tf did he mannage to do 300 excercises in one night, when nothing would count if he didn’t do it perfectly?? He is a magician and has NOT trained his body, wich is fairly obvious, since he’s a generic and bland mc. A person that has not trained their body at all, does not have enough stamina to complete that in one night like that. But let’s say he has enough determenation, where is that coming from? He has no reason to be THIS motivated to train and to get better. We do not get to know in the first 5 chapters, as far as I know. Let’s move on though..
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   In chapter 3, the mc makes a promise/bet with his father. If he gets the highest grade in the evaluation, he will stay in the school and if he doesn’t, he will leave “as his father wishes”. The father did NOT say that his sone HAS TO return. He said that he CAN and has the OPTION to return home. He never said that he HAD to. So the mc basically just put random words into his fathers mouth. Let’s move on.
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   The only really good point I have here is that in chapter 4, it was SOMEWHAT rewarding towards the end, since he beat the generic bully and won. But that’s about it.
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   I do not see the art as a plus point, as the art in manwhas is generally decent and has pretty much the same artstyle everywhere.
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   Rating:

   It was a bad reading experience for me up to chap 5. I do not reccommend unless you really like bad written things.
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   Overall a 2/10.
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   Maybe it will get better in higher chapters, but that doesn’t matter to me since I can’t bring myself to read any more of this burning fire eating away at my sanity.

   April 11, 2024 at 10:51 pm

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3. Prakle

   I didn’t expect much from this, I came in thinking this was going to be generic. However after reading 22 chapters I can say confidently this is very good with great plot, art, and most of all the world building.

   April 1, 2024 at 1:16 am

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